I am a Year 4 student at Christ the King School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Learning Zone and my teachers are Mrs Cochrane and Mrs Driver.
Thursday, 12 June 2014
Sheep
Sheep
I smell yummy treats and saw strange children and a familiar park instructor. The children got their plates ready for the other sheep. l went on the fence. But one child put his hand through the fence. I did not want to let the other sheep to get the food. I got the food before the other sheep. I gave the boy five kisses. Then another boy came and I still wanted more food .So I raced to get more food and i did it again get the food. Then when all the children had finished feeding us. They went off. I climbed on the
fence because I wanted more.
By Makoni.
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